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    Care to comment?

    Leh tolong comment my page?? click on the website button up there..cheers
    just a matter of opinion..
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    cannot lar..
    takdak pun!

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    Yeah... just goes to http://www.kickme.to/

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    err ini satu penipuan ke? hehehehe.. semacam je?

    If ini benda ada betul.. sila post semula yer freakdiver
    <b>A</b>bg<b>C</b>ooL<br><i>Cool as you can be</i>

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    aikk...salah type address

    Hehehe sorry2....tersalah type addresss...click lagik skali kat atas tuh... dah ubah..

    gracias
    just a matter of opinion..
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    alo.. aaa baru betul... tu blog page... hhehehe.. ok la kot? cuma satu je.. english tu soh orang edit sket la.. hehehehe bukan ape.. baru suka sket baca

    ciawzz!
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    u mean all the nasty words??
    just a matter of opinion..
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    Hi,

    It's alrite for a personal blog - easy to read, easy to navigate. Since it's your 3rd shot, congratulations it's up!

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    If u make a content in english.. make it a good english.. people dislike broken or grammatically incorrect english.. ask a foreigner.. they will agree... coz it's on the web and it's in English.. rite? Just to inform.. if can't take critics.. stay in a cave U said u want comments... I give u comment to help ya improve.. if u take it negatively.. how can u excel?

    ciawwzz!
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    Originally posted by AbgCooL
    If u make a content in english.. make it a good english.. people dislike broken or grammatically incorrect english.. ask a foreigner.. they will agree... coz it's on the web and it's in English.. rite? Just to inform.. if can't take critics.. stay in a cave U said u want comments... I give u comment to help ya improve.. if u take it negatively.. how can u excel?

    ciawwzz!
    Actually, I think his language is ok. Freakdiver isn't writing a book, it's not even a corporate website, it's only a simple personal web blog.

    Although there are many grammar mistakes on the blog, the language is reasonable to an extent that it is understandable.

    Most of the mistakes were made mainly due to carelessness. The opening sentence 'a senseless website to fulfill everyday life needs to be alive.....' could be considered grammatically wrong. However, if you change the 'a' to a capital letter and place a dash after 'everyday', it forms 'A senseless website to fulfill everyday - life needs to be alive.....'; a grammatically correct sentence. The point here is that, although the sentence is not grammatically correct, it is understandable, and therefore 'should' be acceptable.

    Before you start telling people off about their 'grammar' you should look at your own first. Your opening sentence to your last post 'If u make a content in english' is already grammatically incorrect. I just want to ask you, how can you 'make a content'? If you want to go into further detail, 'english' requires a capital 'E' as it is a name of a language and 'u' is not a 'grammatically correct' word in the English language.

    Reply to your question: 'ask a foreigner'
    Any foreigner with common sense would accept the grammar on freakdiver's web blog.

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    Aiyakk...jgn gaduh2...

    Your comments are most acceptable and i sincerely accept it. Maybe its about time to improve my English..

    heheheh
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    yela yela.. aku just kasi tau.. kata nak komen.. aku komen la.. ape laaa.. kan dah kata soh pasang editor.. apo la.. komen la.. as I said earlier.. takleh terima komen. dok gua hehehehe.. tq sufyan for ur correction.. toche.. (mandarin kot?)

    ciawzz!

    p/s: my last response .. sorry if my comment menggigit ke memakan ke... just a comment no heart feeling
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    oklah... aku no problem... tapi lain kali, biler nak comment tuh, hati-hatilah... org pun ade persaan tau... no hard feelings

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