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    Need Pro Advise For Newbie

    Hi,

    This is my 1st ever website, need lot of comment for it as I feel a lot of different compare to other which more comfortable to read.

    siy-slimit4u.com

    Thanks & regards,

    Kelvin Ong

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    I think the background colour is too sharp for eye viewing. Personally I think it makes my eyes pain after looking at it too long. You might want to try a softer background colour so that it will reduce the bounce rate of your website. Just my two cents

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    Yea.. get rid of the background, or use something more subdued. It distracts readers from the content.

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    Many thanks, will change soon...

    Thanks & regards,

    Kelvin Ong

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    Why the 'button' is Dapatkan Segera?
    all over the contents are in English but the button?

    the background is too striking color.
    change to darker one.

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    first impression - this does not looks like a site selling professional product. In other words, it does not looks like a professional shopping cart with proper shopping cart application installed.

    the background color makes me feel uncomfortable. and the background image of a girl standing in a style like 18SX.

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    Cool need to understand basic, fundamental, objective: communicate

    I have to agree with nesloka, it doesn't look professional but looking professional is very vague. "Looking professional" is different for everyone.

    To me, the site lacks what I call, the ability to communicate what your product does well. You're pretty much smacking everything on to the page without any structure.

    My suggestion is to look at advertisements, the ones that is similar to your product and try and adapt, innovate and deliver the same communication style. perhaps than, your site will look more professional and believable.

    Just like a retail store (gap, padini, forever 21, la senza), if retail store doesnt look 'professional' and products 'believable', no one will walk in.

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    many thanks for all the comments, appreciate! As mentioned, this is my first ever website. I've only learned how to post it up online. I never learn about the structure / design or proper shopping cart. Is there anyone can give more direct advise?

    I'll change the background and also "dapatkan sekarang" soon. But for the rest, I really have no idea how to change it.

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    Cool Senang je

    Right now, the best way is to choose what website you want to copy

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    Quote Originally Posted by DesignerIkram View Post
    Right now, the best way is to choose what website you want to copy
    can you please show few example for me to follow?

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    I believe you shouldn't make a website in this way,

    1: very messy content delivers to users
    2: it feels like you are putting on scam more than professional service
    3: Colours usage are too much
    4: Your website needed to be scrolled all the way down for extra information


    what I can recommend you is to re-built a whole website and use some tab/sub-pages to organize your information neatly.

    For example:
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    Your website must look professional so that people can put their faith on your products & services
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    checkout designmeltdown.com

    i won't tell you what will be he best for your product because I don't know what your product is about. Choose some websites (maybe 5) which you think could be nice for your product and paste them here. lets see where the participants can give advice.

    then HOW to do it will be another story. patience. it pays off.

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    Evaluating a website is not rocket science. I'll break it down for you. A site needs A header, a content area and a footer.. usually.

    the navigation bar is always at the header, sometimes on the left of the content area.

    the websites you gave me, is ok. not great yet. when I say visit Design Meltdown Design Elements, Trends & Problems in Web Design is that its a good resource to understand about webdesign. I think its best you read all you can from that website to get a better understand about webdesign.

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    good try at first.

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